半支持半反对结构
所谓半支持半反对,就是在第二段讨论比较对比涉及的两个对象中的一个,在第三段和第四段讨论另一个对象。请参考下面的结构图:
第一段:引言
1. 明确话题
2. 给出文章结构布局
第二段:弊端/观点一
1. 分论点一(段落主题句)
2. 例证一(论证过程)
第三段:有利之处一/观点二的理由一
3. 分论点一(段落主题句)
4. 例证一(论证过程)
第四段:有利之处二/观点二的理由二
5. 分论点二(段落主题句)
6. 例证二(论证过程)
结尾:
发表自己的观点
对应的英文文章结构如下所示:
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Background + layout
Paragraph 2-4: Body
Disadvantage / reason for opinion one
Topic Sentence + supporting sentences
Advantages one / reason one for opinion two
Topic Sentence + supporting sentences
Advantages two / reason two for opinion two
Topic Sentence + supporting sentences
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
State my opinion
根据上述结构,我们可以改写第二题至以下提纲:
原创范例(5题):
Introduction: The new factory does bring a range of benefits, yet the residents are not advised to establish it.
Main body 1: Admittedly, the residents and the local government as well gain benefits from the construction of this factory in the community.
Main body 2: However, a large factory will definitely produce pollution to the community.
Main body 3: Moreover, it is possible that traffic jams could happen due to the returning tide during rush hours.
这一系列文章给大家概括介绍了新托福独立写作的问题模式和对应的文章结构,建议托福考生在考前,必须要掌握这三类模式和对应的结构,并列出每类的模板,才能在考试有限的30分钟时间内游刃有余的在结构上应对。
(来源:无忧雅思网)
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